It is the best for children to live with their parents for as long as possible.
Some people think that it can better for the children to live with their families for a long period of time.In this case they will never miss their family and they only be away from their parents when they die.
On the other hand, i guess all the people should spend their most time away from their family. As, only that time they will understand the world they will get new worldview the view that they never expected to get. Furthermore, some people who have the same opinion with me guess that when a person go away from his family that time he really starts to grow up and can "stay on his own feet".
However, the people who are against to this idea think no one would stay away from the parents. But, i consider that this is a kind of wrong statement because when they live they will get not all the things in the world are about families. For example, i will go away from my family this year for my study that is what they do not have to be sad about it as,they now i'm going there for education.
Moreover, with the help of this fading away i will start to construct my future and meet the new people. Sometimes these kind of fading always can be helpful for the people who actually can not tell their feelings. Only in this case they can understand how the families are really essential in our lives.
In the sum, i guess all the people should make their decisions themselves because , that time they will now what they really want but, if they can stay a little bit away from their parents they will approach their aims a little more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
... to live with their families for a long period of time.In this case they will never miss their...
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Suggestion: In
...heir families for a long period of time.In this case they will never miss their fa...
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...nts when they die. On the other hand, i guess all the people should spend their...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...their most time away from their family. As, only that time they will understand th...
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...eople who are against to this idea think no one would stay away from the parents....
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... would stay away from the parents. But, i consider that this is a kind of wrong s...
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...hey really want but, if they can stay a little bit away from their parents they will appro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, i guess, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33219178082 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01050254099 2.67179642975 75% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469178082192 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0284006888 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195574918891 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821302723295 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100327236916 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140724699273 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110337608373 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.