It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
All people need to have basic knowledge in different fields and this need will be supported during preschool, school, and high school. However, from a point in your life, you need to choose a special field (or academic area) and try to get more information and skill in that field. This will have many benefits for you; I will bring some of them in this essay.
First, when you want to have information about different fields, you won't be able to get so deep in them; You will be able just to get a limited and usually not so much information about each field. In contrast, when you choose just one field, you can become so skillful and professional in that. Although being informed of different fields seems so nice, it can't make anyone's future.
Second, getting deep in just one field will need so much less time than getting shallow information in many fields. Maybe just spending limited time like bachelor years will be adequate for starting one field and after that just spending some time weekly or monthly, to update your knowledge, will be enough for your chosen field. In contrast, when you choose many academic areas and want to be informative in them, it will get so much more time. Just to start each one you will need at least one to two years; Besides, being updated in different fields gets so much of your time weekly, or even daily.
The most important benefit is the effect of skill in a special field in your career. Most jobs don't need so many fields, and shallow knowledge isn't enough for attaining them. Therefore, to have a good job, you have to focus on one field and try to become professional in it.
Because of all these benefits and many others, you should try to become so professional in one academic area. Even if you are so interested in different fields, you can dedicate your free time to those other fields, not your whole life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d of different fields seems so nice, it cant make anyones future. Second, gett...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...d of different fields seems so nice, it cant make anyones future. Second, gett...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...owledge, will be enough for your chosen field. In contrast, when you choose many acad...
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Line 11, column 97, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...special field in your career. Most jobs dont need so many fields, and shallow knowle...
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Line 11, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...d so many fields, and shallow knowledge isnt enough for attaining them. Therefore, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, at least, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60416666667 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29883503167 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2215360343 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113310069314 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570778366402 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364420452924 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830247907288 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385085206961 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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