Jane Austen's Found Portrait
The reading is about a portrait that has been considered as Jane Austen picture and it gives us some reasons for relating it to Jane Austen but the lecture doesn't confirm it because of these reasons:
First, the reading says that in 1882 Austen's family has accepted this portrait as her picture but the lecture doesn't agree and it says no one in the family, at that time, even had seen Jane so their evidence can't be proved.
Second, the reading says because the portrait is so similar to what Jane's sister, Cassandra, has painted of her, So it's Jane's. but again the lecture doesn't agree and it says Jane's family had been so crowded and the portrait may belong to one of her family members and has some people as options to be related to the portrait.
Third, the reading says that the style of the portrait is so similar to a painter, named Humphrey, who his working time was exactly when Jane was a teenager. Again, the lecture doesn't confirm it and says just the style isn't a conceiving proof and there should be other reasons too. Moreover, the canvas has been sold by a man named William Leg and when he was selling canvases, Jane had been about 27 years old and she hadn't been a teenager.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ating it to Jane Austen but the lecture doesnt confirm it because of these reasons: ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...portrait as her picture but the lecture doesnt agree and it says no one in the family,...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e, even had seen Jane so their evidence cant be proved. Second, the reading say...
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Suggestion: But
...ndra, has painted of her, So its Janes. but again the lecture doesnt agree and it s...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...er, So its Janes. but again the lecture doesnt agree and it says Janes family had been...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...Jane was a teenager. Again, the lecture doesnt confirm it and says just the style isnt...
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Suggestion: isn't
...esnt confirm it and says just the style isnt a conceiving proof and there should be ...
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Suggestion: hadn't
...ane had been about 27 years old and she hadnt been a teenager.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 220.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14637884558 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504545454545 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.601057444 49.2860985944 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.0 110.228320801 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 21.698381199 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06452816374 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230615712432 0.272083759551 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115712941096 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845026929414 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173577739138 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747846495589 0.0443174109184 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.3589403974 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.7273730684 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.2008830022 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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