It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Since few years ago, the shopping center idea was a conglomerate of shops in order to sell goods. Nowadays that idea was changing due to the new ways of selling, the new opinions between selling and marketing, and management with people. The shopping center now, is more than just a big mall to sell and trade, there people can meet new people, stablish new interactions, go a to shopping is tendency. According to the previous ideas, I will expose my agree position with the new shopping center that will be built in my neighborhood.
More new sites to shop and entrepreneurs developing , this means that we are allowed to visits new stores if our required products are not at the frequented and the neighborhood’s store. With a shopping center we could go to see another options to buy stuff. Besides with the new shopping center people could come and create new business there and start as entrepreneur.
With those previous ideas, another good things that people from my neighborhood could do are, come to the shopping center and meet new people in order to make a friendship, to flirt guys or girls, we must to take in mind the lgbti community, go with the kids in a window-trip, lunch with family, walk with the dog around there… the possibilities are too many. Also, It could be the good place for Tinder dates before the straight point.
Therefore, the shopping center could work as a sweet and comfortable place for homeless people. There, the homeless guys could come and take a place in parking, where each one of the car space converts in a bed for them. This idea could be seen a controversial thought if the owner of the shopping center is selfish with the space there, but if the owner see it as an aid for them, my neighborhood could converts him in a neighborhood’s boss.
To sum up, we need it for increase the commerce, money flow, and get out from the reality of our daily life. Seeing this a wonderful idea to increase the potential growth in the zone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tes to shop and entrepreneurs developing , this means that we are allowed to visit...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... friendship, to flirt guys or girls, we must to take in mind the lgbti community, go wi...
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Line 6, column 405, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'convert'
Suggestion: convert
... an aid for them, my neighborhood could converts him in a neighborhood's boss. T...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67329545455 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76645394332 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502840909091 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9454223187 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120938466483 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050680074115 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348262934922 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690148871745 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288549076939 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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