It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Nowadays, our life is full of various news every time. Some people pay much attention to these events which are totally irreverent to their lives, for the reason that they could broaden their horizons from all kinds of events. Despite minor merits, learning about events about whole world may be impractical, especially the event which would not affect their daily life at all.
For workers, it is not impractical for them to know about most events. Given that every time there are new events happening around the world, it is time-consuming to learn about these events, especially for these hard-working people who basically have no more time to waste in these news or events. Most workers are pretty busy to deal with their own tough affairs, which lead to the limited time for them to relax and rest. They may feel exhausted after a whole day work and will not have more energy to see these news.
For students, there is no doubt that mastering knowledge in school is the most important thing for them. Compared to gain new knowledge, knowing about events about whole world is negligible, especially these events may not affect their life. In addition, if students spend a lot of time in knowing about events, correspondingly the time they used in learning about academic knowledge will be cut down, which is definitely inimical to the development of young students.
Admittedly, sometimes funny events may help workers relief their tiredness, and educational events could inspire students or help them get some new idea or learn something useful. However, these insignificant advantage of knowing events are still not enough to put it at the first crucial place. For workers, there are many more interesting activities for them to relax, like watching movies or reading novels. For students, they could improve themselves from reading a variety of books which is absolutely more meaningful than merely knowing about some unrelated events.
In conclusion, even if it may be somewhat helpful for people to know about some events happening around the world, from the aspect of both workers and students it is not a wise choice to pay much attention on these events.
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- All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...basically have no more time to waste in these news or events. Most workers are pretty busy...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...rk and will not have more energy to see these news. For students, there is no doubt tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02486187845 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52543757113 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494475138122 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7107832105 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.266666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282561126786 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102331499271 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853992531103 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183840509716 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617691260656 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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