It is more enjoyable to have a job when you work only three days a week for long hours than have a job when you work five days a week for shorter hours?
It is no secret that work hours play a prominent role in every individual‘s life. It affects not only your life, but also other family members. In every situation you are either mother or father or sibling and you live in a family. some people might argue that long work hours in fewer days is better, while others are inclined to the idea that this is much more sufficient to work in many workdays in short hours. I firmly believe that it is really more beneficial to work in many days but short hours. In what fallows, I aptly elaborate on my point of view by 2 reasons.
The most significant reason is that by working for short hours you have plenty of time to do other activities you love after work. For example my friend is a teacher. She arrives at home at 12 o’clock and has lunch with her child, she goes to gym regularly every day and she has a clear schedule for every workday. That’s why I prefer working for short hours but many workdays.
The second equally important reason is that we would be bored and really lazy, If we don’t work for two or three successive days. For example my father was off three days last week. It was so difficult for him to wake up at 5 am to go to work next day. Besides, He was exhausted of long hours of working .As you can see working for few days but many hours make people worn out.
In conclusion, although some people prefer working for long hours I adhere to the idea that short hours and many workdays is more productive. So it is highly recommended that decreasing time of workday but increase the workdays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42662116041 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4294971988 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9341254443 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400174223766 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131750130272 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090559812974 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248588470773 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621829863588 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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