treating children
Throughot history, treating children has been of great importance.The role of children behavior in their future society is undenyable. Due to this crucial impact on their way of future lives, the question of weather children should be paid money for their each high grade is the topic of controversy. While some people agrees withthis idea, other hold the opposite view. I personaly disagree with this plan . In what fallows I will aptly elaborate on my perspective by sogtme reasons.
The first significant point which should be mentioned is that if children earn money for their high grades, They will pay so much attention to making money not to learning lessons. TAake a personal experience as an example, one of my best friend, Mina, was ranked one in the class. In fact all of her marks were 20 becuase her parent would pay her for her excellent marks. In contrast she hadn't leasons which teacher have taght us. She had just memorized evey sentences of books. As a result for upper grade, she couldn't learn as much as other students could. Thus, she failed many of exams.
Another equally important reason is that,human have an endless wantiing character which get satisfied in a more sophisticated way every day which I mean by paying children money, they would want more and more money evey year of their educational yearsFor instance, my brother, Ali, got money for his best mark in mathematics last year.However, when he passed his exam with ful mark yesterday , he wanted two times more money than previous time.
To wrap it up, It can be concluded that offering money to children has many diverse impacts on their characteristics. It is hi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, i mean, in contrast, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8829787234 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62326306824 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.540411800872 122% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 101.029016734 49.2860985944 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 91.8 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162841421176 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479792653944 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100460523105 0.0662205650399 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106546358058 0.162205337803 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811669106722 0.0443174109184 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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