Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Man lives in a society which is consist of different kinds of people and we need to interact with them to lead our daily life. We can even think a single day with other people contribution in our life.So I personally believe, it is more important to work as a team rather than individually. I feel like this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, if more people able to work in a group to do a definite task it will be more easily done. To be more specific when we are trying to solve a problem as a group, we have so many ideas from every group member.And we can discuss with each other & able to find the easiest & convenient solution which help us to solve the task more quickly & correctly. Furthermore, if any member of the group makes a fault,it can be easily diagnosed & corrected.
Secondly, it improves our interaction with other people & made us more sociable. My own is a compelling example of this. In my junior school days, I was so introvert & rarely communicate with other students of the class. Then one day teacher divides the class into the different group & gave a project to do as a team. During the project period, I was able to work as a team which help me a lot to communicate with other group members thus ultimately change my introvert characteristics. Now i can easily interact with different kinds of people which further made me a successful customer service representative in my carrier.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 261.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55938697318 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75864141793 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9086160914 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304370832669 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109319570071 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793364128304 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202215922674 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373121726541 0.0645574589148 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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