It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Some people think that having the internet and improving it would be highly advantageous as one could access different platforms and do many remote tasks in the comfort of home. However, I have a very strong opinion that improving public transportation is beneficial to everyone. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the below essay.
To begin with, spending money to enhance public transportation is crucial as it would help many professionals to have a safe and comfortable commute to their work. My spouse's personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. For the past 7 years, my husband who commutes every day to his office in New York spends almost four hours on the train standing, as he has no place to sit along with many others. As a result, he has developed a major health issue corresponding to his backbone. Only when the government has added more trains for the route, my husband had a comfortable journey which also helped him with his health issue. In contrast, if only technology was improved many others along with my husband would still be suffering. Improving public transportation would help many working individuals to get to their work with fresh minds rather than being tired.
Secondly, working on developing public transportation will help people to have a better social life. For instance, in my case when I was doing my graduation two years back, our family used to live in a remote place that is close to my father's industry. I could meet up with my friends from the college and hang out with them as we had access to the public bus service, with which a bus to the city arrived right in front of our residency. However, with just the Internet being available with no public transportation, I would have just talked to my friends in voice and video calls rather than meet up with them on a regular basis to have fun. Better public transportation significantly helps students and many others visit and socialize with friends and family.
In conclusion, I believe strongly that money spent on the upgrade of public transportation is significant for the above-stated reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84931506849 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84427108868 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8571731003 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25478048802 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860372200979 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595450955164 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169540668459 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041655589948 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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