It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Some people think that having the internet and improving it would be highly advantageous as one could access different platforms and do many remote tasks in the comfort of home. However, I have a very strong opinion that improving public transportation is beneficial to everyone. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the below essay.
To begin with, spending money to enhance public transportation is crucial as it would help many professionals to have a safe and comfortable commute to their work. My spouse's personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. For the past 7 years, my husband who commutes every day to his office in New York spends almost four hours on the train standing, as he has no place to sit along with many others. As a result, he has developed a major health issue corresponding to his backbone. Only when the government has added more trains for the route, my husband had a comfortable journey which also helped him with his health issue. In contrast, if only technology was improved many others along with my husband would still be suffering. Improving public transportation would help many working individuals to get to their work with fresh minds rather than being tired.
Secondly, working on developing public transportation will help people to have a better social life. For instance, in my case when I was doing my graduation two years back, our family used to live in a remote place that is close to my father's industry. I could meet up with my friends from the college and hang out with them as we had access to the public bus service, with which a bus to the city arrived right in front of our residency. However, with just the Internet being available with no public transportation, I would have just talked to my friends in voice and video calls rather than meet up with them on a regular basis to have fun. Better public transportation significantly helps students and many others visit and socialize with friends and family.
Finally, the development of public transportation would increase tourism, which in turn will result in a better economy for the country. To back this up, the economic growth of a small place Kerala, in India is a perfect example. A few years back, no one knew about this place. But when the government focused on enriching the transportation facilities and laid better roads, many tourists from all over the world started visiting this beautiful village and the rustic landscapes and indigenous local crafts gained popularity. With all this, this village has become one of the topmost attractive places to visit in the country. As a result, this value addition has also helped to promote, advertise and attract people from the whole world.
In conclusion, I believe strongly that money spent on the upgrade of public transportation is undisputedly significant for the above-stated reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92213114754 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82250322512 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514344262295 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9725300184 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.181818182 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239743518985 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697632675975 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607359888328 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145904680461 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574947783715 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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