IT IS THE RESPONSIBILITY OF THE GOVERNMENT TO PROVIDE HEALTHCARE TO EVERYONE LIVING IN THAT COUNTRY.
In this contemporary developing world the number of healthy people has dramatically gone down, because of industrial and economical transformations. Admittedly, it is quite difficult for people to remain healthy, especially when living in cities, mainly due to a lot of pollution, high costs of treatments and medicine. Therefore, I can vehemently declare that the government has to support its people and provide their health care mainly because of the reasons mentioned in the subsequent body paragraphs.
To commence with, the government is elected by people to improve their condition and satisfy their requirements. In other words, the government is responsible for its people and should do everything to provide them with secure lives. As security today is mainly depends on health, governments should first take care of people’s appropriate medical treatments. In my opinion, government is the main cause of most diseases, due to constructing industrial factories and conducting mining processes, which are so harmful for health. Moreover such industrial activities can even cause mutations and cancer. Therefore, government is supposed to compensate this harm by releasing people from health care charges, which usually can cost an arm and a leg.
In addition, all countries want to increase the number of their population, certainly except for China. And for this very purpose, they should not only encourage births, but also provide health care to ameliorate people’s health and support longer lives. This, in turn, will result in the reduction of deaths, hence providing gradual increase in population. Moreover, people, who know that health care is free of charge, will turn to doctors more often, consequently detecting and preventing the diseases at their early stages. For example, when I have some pains, I usually do not let my parents’ know about it, as I am pretty sure that they will immediately take me to hospital. Eventually, this will back on them a fortune.
In the light of the reasons mentioned above, I do believe that government should provide health care of its people.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, except for, for example, in addition, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41441441441 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99597977525 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573573573574 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3153265261 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6875 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128491075616 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464327855848 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486767430802 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912045838925 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374218810066 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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