It was easier in past to choose career or safe future
The successful career is dream of all young people. Whether it is related to the job or study. In past, career was same imperative as it is in present. Although, the plethora of people thinks that it is easier to choose career or job in today's world, I believe that it very difficult in modern society. I feel this way because of few reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, there are many students who want to choose best career. Thus, competition has been increased among the students. However, in the past most of the people did not know the value of education, so there had to do little struggle. In recent era, an education level has been increased. Everybody knows the value of that. Therefore, when people start to find job, they have to face conflicts. A competition is one of the causes for unemployment. That is why I am of the opinion that it is difficult for people to find successful future, because they do not know whether they can get chance to do job after competition of education.
The second and equally exquisite proof for this assertion is about sits in government jobs. In recent scenario, secure career is only in government job. When people get government job, they feel that they are safe for rest of their life. For example, in dental field, there are few sits available in the government quota as it is for M.B.B.S. students. Dentists are able to do only private practice, which may not be safer in future.
Finally, in the curruptive country, no one is known that when economy of country will go down. There are many other factors too, which are related to country's economy. If it will go down, then no one can ensure that they would have the bright future. On other hand, in past there were less curruptive people, and people's requirements were less, so it was safe for country's people. They knew that their leader is trustworthy.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, i agree with that it was easier to find successful future in the past. There were less competition between students and more chances to get job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...ther it is related to the job or study. In past, career was same imperative as it is in...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...ople thinks that it is easier to choose career or job in todays world, I believe that ...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...rivate practice, which may not be safer in future. Finally, in the curruptive country,...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ion, based on arguments explored above, i agree with that it was easier to find s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i feel, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66397849462 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50830940731 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502688172043 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0334511253 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.88 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.56 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21019866528 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518526825944 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857501805855 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12509433292 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835155609179 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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