knowledge

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eel this way for couple of reasons that i will explore in the following paragraph...
^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ood example for this. Back in 2001 when i started my major in pharmay there were ...
^
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nothing'?
Suggestion: nothing
...n ellective subject which seems to have no thing to do with pharmacy. Ten years later wh...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... do with pharmacy. Ten years later when i began to work in a pharmacy in united s...
^
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun candidate seems to be countable; consider using: 'many candidates'.
Suggestion: many candidates
... a pharmacy in united state the were so many candidate for pharmacy manager and i was among th...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...many candidate for pharmacy manager and i was among them. Based on my knowledge o...
^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... them. Based on my knowledge of econemy i demonstrated good command of maintaning...
^
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...tory and taking care of the discripancy in every day sales. This extra knowledge was added u...
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Line 3, column 741, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...y pharmacy degree and made me different than my other coworkers who are focusing onl...
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Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'medications'' or 'medication's'?
Suggestion: medications'; medication's
...ther coworkers who are focusing only on medications domain. Second, gaining knowledge ab...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...oad subjects can help us in a difficult situations. For instance, my father was a teacher,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of the emergent problems in our society . One day he felt that his salary was not...
^^
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nses and he decided to have an extra job .He got a position of consultant in a rdi...
^^
Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...es and he decided to have an extra job .He got a position of consultant in a rdio ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, for instance, i feel, i think, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83045977011 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85436872056 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4596325693 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0625 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240233663256 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882736069366 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102411358117 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177248634146 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723831723045 0.0645574589148 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.