language
If my acquaintance would like to study my native language, the ways I would convince him/her to study it would be mainly that it’s a quite interesting language, it’s hard, even harder than English itself, but it is a challenge which is worth trying.
One reason to study spanish is that it gives you the opportunity to study abroad, there are many countries which have spanish as their native language, such as Chile, Argentina, Perú, Bolivia, Mexico, Spain and many more.
Another reason to study spanish is the fact that you would interact more easily with the locals, due to the fact that most of these countries do not know english, so if he/she would like to travel to south America, the best option is to know their language to have the best experience.
The reason some people tend to learn Spanish is they are attracted to Spanish culture. Spanish sounds more exotic, some words tend to captivate the foreigner’s ears and would likely end up imitating. In the literature department, some of the best books ever written were written in spanish, such as “Don Quijote de la Mancha”, “100 años de soledad”, “veinte poemas de amor y una cancion desesperada”, just to name a few.
If he/she wants to study archeology, geology, it is a must to study Spanish, in cases like Chile’s desserts were these professionals are needed, they must know the language, or else they would not be able to communicate.
Finally, a great reason to study Spanish, are the great friends he/she will meet along her live, due to the fact that Spanish native speakers, specially latin americans, tend to be more friendly and more hospitably.
In conclusion, learning spanshi not only opens the possibility to new jobs or experiences, but also to meet new places and friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...s to study archeology, geology, it is a must to study Spanish, in cases like Chile&apos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01986754967 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86767966914 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0622601961 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.444444444 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5555555556 20.6045352989 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0275392599449 0.236089414692 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0119856509744 0.076458572812 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339005403238 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0154101226814 0.150856017488 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377469374431 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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