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Life is much easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Do you agree or disagree.

The world has changed in many ways and as a result of this, my life has been superior to that of my grandparent for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essays.

To start with, nowadays young children have leisure time to carry out other activities and by doing so they tend to have a more fulfilling life. My experience is a compelling example of this.Where I work, I am entitled to a two weeks vacation in a year.I can choose to spread out the vacation or rather finish the vacation at once.With this yearly vacation, i was able to touch all the continents in the world.Again the widespread of internet has made the younger generations more smarter in doing things. Drawing from my own experience, after i graduated from the university i needed to add value to myself because i am looking forward to entering managerial position for employment. So i had to take some online courses on coursera just to add up to my resume.And as a result, i was able to get the position.In contrast, my grandparents are only entitled to break after retirement.Besides, acquiring skills during their time is limited because there is no internet and even the wealthy ones among them had to trek through thousands of miles before they can get things done for themselves.All this illustration simply demonstrates how children in the recent time do not only achieve a fulfilling life but also incorporate smartness into their way of life.

Furthermore,children in recent times have more opportunities of pursuing multiple careers than the past generations and with that, they can easily segue without being interrupted.My own experience is a compelling example of this.Before i studied pharmacy at the University of Lagos, i had pursue a career as a food technologist in one other school..After completing my pharmacy degree i needed to work in order to care of my siblings.i tried many pharmaceutical companies but all my effort proved abortive.So on one beautiful Monday, i was going through my facebook page and i came across an opening on food technologist, immediately i saw this i quickly applied and i got a call for the interview which i attended.And as a result, i ended up getting the job. However, during my grandparent's time, just few people are opportuned to get high school grading and as a result many of them go into farming.This example simply demonstrates how newer generations are opened to more opportunities than their grandparents.

In light of the reasons mentioned, the lives of the newer generation are far easier because they have access to leisure time and also have a plethora of opportunities than their grandparents.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, in contrast, as a result, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95515695067 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20270427067 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526905829596 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.1344086022 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.697650675 48.9658058833 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.25 100.406767564 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.75 20.6045352989 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.875 5.45110844103 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 5.5376344086 885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12625837047 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621924781515 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323232694856 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756322462488 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256008799712 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 11.7677419355 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 58.1214874552 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.1575268817 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.0537634409 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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