At the universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support
There is a great debate on whether sports and social activities are equally essential as academic activities. Although many believe they are necessary and should get the same fund. However, others refute by clarifying that unequal provisions should be made available by the universities. I personally posit they should have the same provisions because they both contribute to the comprehensive development of students. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
First of all, research has shown that students who engage in sport and social activities improve their health fitness and also do well in competitions.My personal experience is a great example, when i was in the university, i joined the football team in my school so before i attend lectures, i always play football for one hour and by so doing i never visited the health centres neither do i got admitted on the hospital bed and in the end i came out to be the best graduating student in my class.Moreover in the year 2020 my school was invited for a football competition outside the country and we came first in the competition and consequently, our school became known to all.This example simply demonstrates why universities should give equal support to sport and classes.
Secondly, academic activities and sports produce mutual benefits for students. For instance, My husband is pursuing his Doctorate degree in Physics at the University of Idaho. He does a lot of reading because of his upcoming exam and he also complains of back pain which might have resulted from the sitting positon.So i advise he visit the sport center. When he got there, the therapist massaged his whole body for a week and also advice he get a massaging cream.Since then he got relief and he was able to prepare well for the exam.Again, his research was recognised by one of the top-notch aerospace companies in the United States with this reason, his school gained more popularity.This example explicitly shows how sports and academics support each other.
In light of the reasons mentioned, social and sporting activities are equally important as classes and libraries because they both contribute greatly to the university and with that they should receive equal support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88953323701 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553475935829 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.158233631 48.9658058833 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.0 100.406767564 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.6045352989 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 5.45110844103 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240647213715 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101483350818 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122127865993 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190668587897 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150736223766 0.0645574589148 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 11.7677419355 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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