Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your positions.
[11:05 am, 06/11/2021] Purvi Kadekoppa: To begin with each person is grown up in different scenarios giving them a different perspective about life. life being said is broad spectrum it includes money, family, god and so on. that being said in todays competitive world, money is the drive. it is been seen and taught that money can buy anything and everything. which may or may not be true as "everything" is subjective from person to person. if asked someone "if you wanna be rich and ..." they cut the half way to answer money and anything with it ok. To be frank I think its ok if they see money buys them happiness. I think anyone would wanna be sad and crying in a Gucci outfit in a Lamborghini.
In addition to all these fancy stuff, great amount of money brings a lot of stress and responsibilities. stress being how to invest, where to invest and how to remain in the top. they say that money and power was too addictive, once into it there is no way out. which in itself has pros and cons. The kick of earning millions and exploring keeps you on your feet, but at the end of the does it really matter? Do we any bit of it after we die? that's something to ask ourselves.
There are lot more people who believe in satisfied earning which pays off their rent, emergency hospital bills and gives them a comfortable life. And it nice that they are not going overboard to make tons of property for their family or themselves. I don't think anyone would say no to earning more money, it is just that few people have realized how much is enough for them. what actually makes them happy.
In conclusion, it all about what makes one happy and satisfied. if money and material stuff makes their heart skip a beat that's then millions is their target. if a normal materialistic life with adequate amount of money brings them peace, than that's it. that's life. but we humans have one bad habit, we never know when to say enough.
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- Many people believe that it is very important to make large amount of money while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living Analyze each point and take a stand Give specific reasons for your position 66
- Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand Give specific reasons for your positions 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, really, so, then, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51267605634 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54991666239 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2490888377 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.652173913 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4347826087 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144546531711 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361795228254 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368197450207 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090484988321 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521900683751 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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