Many students are concerned how to make more friends, since friends are significant to everyone. In my opnion, taking part in community activities is the best way to make more friends. I feel this way for several reasons, and I will demonstrate in the subsequent passage.
To begin with, you will find people who have similar interest with you when you participate activities. As we all know, it is much easier to make friends with someone who shares the same hobbies with you. Since you meet him/her in a program, it is likely that you have familiar topics to chat with him/her. For instance, I meet one of my best friends when I participated a education vollunteer group. In this case, we founded that we both care about teaching and edaction issues, and we shared our thinkings and thoughts to each other. If we had not enjoy the same interest, we would not have met in the education volunteer program. Therefore, people probably can come to know someone who could be your friends when taking part in community activities.
What's more, you probably have more topics to share with the people, for you have to spend plenty of time on community acitivities. According to the scientific reseach, people are used to make friends with who they stayed much time with. Even though they are different kinds of people at the beginning, they will gradually be closed and become friends. The experience of my cousin is a compelling example to elaborate this idea. He did community service when he was in high school. At the biginning, he met a girl who annoyed him because they always had conflicts about the community work, and he even fight with her. No need to say, the girl disliked him as well. However, after they worked for a semester, the came to understand other's opinion and perspectives. Now, they have been intimate friends. This example tells us that time can change people's ideas and make them to become friends.
Last but not least, it is apparent that you could meet people from the same community since you are participate community activities, which means you have more relation with them. As far as I am concerned, people in the same community have more chance to hang out together. You can even just go to someone's home to have fun sometimes. This is so convinient for comunication and interaction. Therefore, you could be very close friends with who you take part in the same community activity with you. When I was in primary school, I went to a neighborhood reading club. Furthermore, I made friends with neighbor kids who live near to my home. By doing community service, we could met people in our blocks and make friends with them.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that people are more likely to make friends by doing community activities. This is because you can meet people who share the similar interest with you and live near you, and you have the chance to spend lots of time with each other when taking part in activities.
Many students are concerned how to make more friends, since friends are significant to everyone. In my opnion, taking part in community activities is the best way to make more friends. I feel this way for several reasons, and I will demonstrate in the subsequent passage.
To begin with, you will find people who have similar interest with you when you participate activities. As we all know, it is much easier to make friends with someone who shares the same hobbies with you. Since you meet him/her in a program, it is likely that you have familiar topics to chat with him/her. For instance, I meet one of my best friends when I participated a education vollunteer group. In this case, we founded that we both care about teaching and edaction issues, and we shared our thinkings and thoughts to each other. If we had not enjoy the same interest, we would not have met in the education volunteer program. Therefore, people probably can come to know someone who could be your friends when taking part in community activities.
What's more, you probably have more topics to share with the people, for you have to spend plenty of time on community acitivities. According to the scientific reseach, people are used to make friends with who they stayed much time with. Even though they are different kinds of people at the beginning, they will gradually be closed and become friends. The experience of my cousin is a compelling example to elaborate this idea. He did community service when he was in high school. At the biginning, he met a girl who annoyed him because they always had conflicts about the community work, and he even fight with her. No need to say, the girl disliked him as well. However, after they worked for a semester, the came to understand other's opinion and perspectives. Now, they have been intimate friends. This example tells us that time can change people's ideas and make them to become friends.
Last but not least, it is apparent that you could meet people from the same community since you are participate community activities, which means you have more relation with them. As far as I am concerned, people in the same community have more chance to hang out together. You can even just go to someone's home to have fun sometimes. This is so convinient for comunication and interaction. Therefore, you could be very close friends with who you take part in the same community activity with you. When I was in primary school, I went to a neighborhood reading club. Furthermore, I made friends with neighbor kids who live near to my home. By doing community service, we could met people in our blocks and make friends with them.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that people are more likely to make friends by doing community activities. This is because you can meet people who share the similar interest with you and live near you, and you have the chance to spend lots of time with each other when taking part in activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of my best friends when I participated a education vollunteer group. In this cas...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...d thoughts to each other. If we had not enjoy the same interest, we would not have me...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...taking part in community activities. Whats more, you probably have more topics to ...
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Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'had' and 'conflicts'.
Suggestion: had always conflicts
...met a girl who annoyed him because they always had conflicts about the community work, and he even f...
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Line 5, column 602, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fights'.
Suggestion: fights
...s about the community work, and he even fight with her. No need to say, the girl disl...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'participated'.
Suggestion: participated
...e from the same community since you are participate community activities, which means you h...
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Line 7, column 678, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'meet'
Suggestion: meet
...e. By doing community service, we could met people in our blocks and make friends w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2444.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73643410853 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55635655506 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451550387597 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4962021064 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4666666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288958497449 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981735228859 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119415736673 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262224237923 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.251168408745 0.0645574589148 389% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.