In many universities, Freshmen are required to live on campus. Do you agree or disagree with the rule of the college? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
In developed societies, the entrance of the university has been opened for many people more than in the past. Some people say that the most exciting part of college life is that living at college dorms. On the other hand, other people say that in the college life, the hardest part is that sharing the small room with many people in college apartment during the freshman. There is a question that should freshman live on campus. I strongly agree with the statement, I would like to introduce the views to support my opinion.
For the newcomers of the college, the hardest point is how they get used to the new lifestyle of the college, for instance, classes and new friends. The merit of living on-campus is the distance from the school. Freshmen usually have classes on the early morning. Some students who live off-campus are so easy to fail to arrive the class room on the early morning, therefore the location helps students to get there on time. In addition, the location works an important role to let students focus on the study. As the students can reach the library and the cafeteria in a short time, they don’t need to waste the time, they can concentrate on studying as much as they can.
Another strong point of living on-campus is that the circumstance help students build strong relationships with other students. The students spend time with other students for 24 hours per day. They always take the same classes and eat together during the lunchtime. Also, they discuss the topics of the class and their future plans. It helps build the strong connections between the students. Therefore they will get the life-long friends.
In conclusion, the term of living on-campus is necessary for the freshman to get used to the new circumstance of college and get strong connections with other students.
- In many universities, Freshmen are required to live on campus. Do you agree or disagree with the rule of the college? Use specific details and examples in your answer. 60
- Youth is wasted on the young Agree or Disagree 80
- The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. 60
- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? 66
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In developed societies, the entrance of ...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...trong connections between the students. Therefore they will get the life-long friends. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48962137266 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483974358974 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5721694504 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154323029327 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526870018435 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484810218663 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107752439998 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497356621748 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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