Now children do not behavior as well as the children did in the past. Which one of the following measure do you think can help children (age 5~10) behave better?
A. Control the time they spend on TV or movie.
B. Take more time to chat with children.
C. Monitor the interaction between children and their peers.
Being a parent, requires a great amount of attention, patience and energy for teaching the children to behave appropriately. The greatest responsibility lies on parents in training process of their children for a more healthy and appropriate behavior. Previously children tend to behave better than they do nowadays. There are a great number of strategies for development of children’s behavior. Exercising control over the duration of time children spend in front of TV, allocating more time to communicate and chat with them and to observe and monitor the interaction of children with their peers are amongst the most effective strategies for improvement of children’s behavior. From my point of view allocating more time to be spent with children seems more fruitful due to two reasons which I will discuss below.
One of the advantages of spending more time with children and chatting with them is that parents will be able to provide a warm and friendly atmosphere at home. The more friendly and tight-knit the atmosphere of home becomes, children will tend to stay at home more. This increases the time children spend at home and with their parents therefore, parents can easily observe and control the behavior of their own children and children are less prone to be influenced by outside factors such as friends or other strangers. For instance a male child who spends most of his time with his parents specially with father chatting, watching football and playing games will spend less time outside the house with friends. In addition the child will be encouraged and be directed towards more healthy activities by parents such as reading books, magazines and newspapers instead of wasting time on harmful video games.
The other benefit of spending more time and chatting with children is about the growing intimacy between parent and child. Increasing the intimacy in child-parent relationship enables the child to be more comfortable and confident to discuss his/her problems, fears and needs with parents. Nowadays that the child-parent relationships is more shattered and each suffer from a lack of intimacy with each other, providing such comfort within parental relationship is very helpful. For better clarification, imagine a child who is able to easily communicate with his parents and he is facing problem in school and is bullied by other students. When he is able to discuss the problem with parents, they can take necessary steps for punishment of those students and come up with possible solutions to solve their child’s problem and protect him from possible damages and injuries.
Monitoring the interaction of children with their peers is another possible strategy which will be fruitful. However it demands more time for observing the interaction and sometimes it is impossible since children spend time with their peers in school, gym, play grounds and etc away from parents where they will not be able to observe them. Controlling the time children spend to watch TV and movies seems helpful but it will not be as effective as other strategies since children will break the rules and watch TV or movies stealthily or in absence of parents.
To summarize, I believe that training children to behave appropriately is one of the most difficult responsibilities of parents. Among great number of strategies to improve behavior of children, spending more time with them and chatting seems more effective which makes the atmosphere of home more friendly and increases the intimacy in parent-child relationship. Controlling the time spend for watching TV or movie and observing the interaction of children with their peers are possible fruitful solutions but they have their own shortcomings. These strategies help parents in training process of children that will make them to behave healthily and appropriately in future.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 717, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...time outside the house with friends. In addition the child will be encouraged and be dir...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun intimacy seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lack of intimacies'.
Suggestion: a lack of intimacies
... is more shattered and each suffer from a lack of intimacy with each other, providing such comfort...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ssible strategy which will be fruitful. However it demands more time for observing the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 665, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...m to behave healthily and appropriately in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 13.8261648746 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 98.0 52.1666666667 188% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3240.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 618.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2427184466 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84163588125 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409385113269 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.9 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1157747057 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.869565217 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8695652174 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91304347826 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40979997757 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16466337556 0.076458572812 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090987379593 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293608752159 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103441311316 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 717, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...time outside the house with friends. In addition the child will be encouraged and be dir...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun intimacy seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lack of intimacies'.
Suggestion: a lack of intimacies
... is more shattered and each suffer from a lack of intimacy with each other, providing such comfort...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ssible strategy which will be fruitful. However it demands more time for observing the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 665, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...m to behave healthily and appropriately in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 13.8261648746 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 98.0 52.1666666667 188% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3240.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 618.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2427184466 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84163588125 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409385113269 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.9 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1157747057 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.869565217 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8695652174 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91304347826 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40979997757 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16466337556 0.076458572812 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090987379593 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293608752159 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103441311316 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.