Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching.
With the development of the film industry, there is an increasing number of people who choose to go to the cinema at weekends. As for the preference of the genre of movies, some people believe that only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching while others disagree. In my opinion, I believe it is favorable to watch various genres rather than realistic ones solely. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
For starters, movies can benefit us by adding color to our daily life and relieving our pressure after heavy work, making us prepared for another day. When people watch science fictions and romantic movies, they will likely to be absorbed in the twisted plots, forgetting the obstacles in their life. My own experience is a compelling model of that. Faced with the pressure of the National College Entrance Exam, I was too stressful to have sufficient sleep when I was in high school. In order to escape from the daunting environment, I went to the cinema every Saturday, where I watched large amounts of popcorn movies like Star War, Iron Man, and Ip Man. I immersed myself in the virtual world and enjoyed experiencing the adventure of characters in those movies. Every time I walked out the cinema, I felt relaxed and energetic enough to face the seemingly endless exams and assignments in school. This example shows that watching movies which are unrelated to real life helps people bring back their vims. If we only concentrate on realistic movies, the disappointing endings and the darkness of the society reflected in those movies may bring us some emotional problems.
Besides, watching movies of various genres can stimulate our imagination, which is conducive to the all-round development of people. Scientists may be inspired by some concept in scientific fictions and improve the techonology accordingly. Children can enhance their sense of colour and get access to a new world when watching cartoon movies. For example, the famous Disney movie, Frozen, is the product of plenty of professional painters. The beauty of the virtual world impressed the audience once released, helping children to establish a concept of beauty. If we had deprived children the opportunity to watch such splendid movies, they would have missed a meaningful experience.
We cannot deny the fact that people can absorb knowledge from realistic movies. In some conditions, realistic movies can even boost the development of society in that they reveal some drawbacks of our social system. However, the advantages of other movies should never be ignored. They play a significant role in the film history, the culture industry, and people’s mental life.
Based on the reasons stated above, I can safely conclude that it is beneficial to watch movies which do not emphasize reflecting real life because these movies benefit people in many aspects. The most recommended way is to be open to options as many as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, however, if, may, so, while, as for, as to, for example, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2506.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07287449393 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6789568826 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546558704453 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0582600823 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.24 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.76 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271051005118 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632549350464 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843259391867 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152980385603 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690632378769 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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