Opening a new place such as shopping malls, food courts, or recreational areas brings several changes to the community. These businesses can be an underlying cause of the prosperity for any given society. Inaugurating a new restaurant in my neighborhood would be beneficial, and in the following paragraphs, I lend credence to this view.
First and foremost, a new restaurant will provide redeeming job opportunities for people living nearby. The new restaurant, which most of the time is the franchise of another brand, can be done with a lower level of experience. Even a college student or a teenager can manage to work in such kind of jobs. Carrying out a part-time job, young people can get independent of their family and stand on their own foot, providing them to earn money to fulfill their requirements such as tuition fees. Assume a freshman student suffering from the budget limitation occasionally and needs to take a loan for his university expenses. By opening a new restaurant nearby, he can accomplish a part-time vocation, helping him afford his university along with living costs; and he will be able to repay the loan on time. Therefore, he would be assigned a restaurant staff without requiring job experience. Admittedly, nothing is gratifying than being independent of the family for paying tuition fees, and opening a new restaurant would have far-reaching repercussions in different aspects of young people.
Moreover, a new restaurant introduces other cultures to people not acquainted with. Nowadays, ethnic foods are noticeably popular among people wanting to try a unique, exciting taste, a trigger for getting familiar with other nations’ traditions. Also, trying new foods can be stimulating for curious people always seeking unique, novel experiences, creating nourishment for their sense of curiosity. A new Chinese restaurant located adjacent to the central park near my house have found a considerable number of advocates because of its healthy, organic foods. This business opens miscellaneous opportunities for other businesses related to the Chinese culture such as acupuncture healthcare center and herbal medicine store to be inaugurated, as the result of people’s desire to this culture introduced by that restaurant. In fact, not only did that restaurant makes nearby people familiar with chinese culture, but it also led to the arena prosperity thanks to people’s demands for other Chinese businesses.
In the final analysis, opening a new restaurant can be beneficial for individuals living in its neighborhood. This is because young people would be provided with new job opportunities, and this business can be a reason for getting familiar with other cultures through ethnic foods.
Opening a new place such as shopping malls, food courts, or recreational areas brings several changes to the community. These businesses can be an underlying cause of the prosperity for any given society. Inaugurating a new restaurant in my neighborhood would be beneficial, and in the following paragraphs, I lend credence to this view.
First and foremost, a new restaurant will provide redeeming job opportunities for people living nearby. The new restaurant, which most of the time is the franchise of another brand, can be done with a lower level of experience. Even a college student or a teenager can manage to work in such kind of jobs. Carrying out a part-time job, young people can get independent of their family and stand on their own foot, providing them to earn money to fulfill their requirements such as tuition fees. Assume a freshman student suffering from the budget limitation occasionally and needs to take a loan for his university expenses. By opening a new restaurant nearby, he can accomplish a part-time vocation, helping him afford his university along with living costs; and he will be able to repay the loan on time. Therefore, he would be assigned a restaurant staff without requiring job experience. Admittedly, nothing is gratifying than being independent of the family for paying tuition fees, and opening a new restaurant would have far-reaching repercussions in different aspects of young people.
Moreover, a new restaurant introduces other cultures to people not acquainted with. Nowadays, ethnic foods are noticeably popular among people wanting to try a unique, exciting taste, a trigger for getting familiar with other nations’ traditions. Also, trying new foods can be stimulating for curious people always seeking unique, novel experiences, creating nourishment for their sense of curiosity. A new Chinese restaurant located adjacent to the central park near my house have found a considerable number of advocates because of its healthy, organic foods. This business opens miscellaneous opportunities for other businesses related to the Chinese culture such as acupuncture healthcare center and herbal medicine store to be inaugurated, as the result of people’s desire to this culture introduced by that restaurant. In fact, not only did that restaurant makes nearby people familiar with Chinese culture, but it also led to the arena prosperity thanks to people’s demands for other Chinese businesses.
In the final analysis, opening a new restaurant can be beneficial for individuals living in its neighborhood. This is because young people would be provided with new job opportunities, and this business can be a reason for getting familiar with other cultures through ethnic foods.
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- Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money to only one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why?- An organization that provides food and housing to people in 76
- TPO44 73
- It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 83
- If people want to contribute to the society, which of the following is the best way?1. Riding bicycle or walking on foot2. Recycling the waste3. Buy local organic food 71
- Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (5-10 years old)?1-being helpful2-Being honest3-Being well organized 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38837209302 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09320597467 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548837209302 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6764431926 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.947368421 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6315789474 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423928161613 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145388159693 0.076458572812 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141751238091 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346915500101 0.150856017488 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.275348354573 0.0645574589148 427% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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