Opinion regarding what should be build
Park
Library
Swimming pool
Different people may have different opinion about what should be build using donation. However, I strongly believe that government should build a public park with the money. There are various reason of mine and I will discuss it in upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, a public park can be used by almost every person of any age group. They can use it to play games, for working out, for meditation, and even for just discussing and gossiping. However, pool and library can be used by every person with such enthusiasm. While the younger kid enjoy the most of their time there, the working and old age can barely be excited about using pool facility. Also, the pool can only be used during summers mainly, whether a park can be used at any time irrespective of season.
Secondly, public parks also have open gym and playing area where everyone can enjoy there time. Apart from this, generally it also consist playground area for basketball, badminton, skating and other such games where people can play accordingly. I can still remember my time during schooling when we used to be very excited from school itself to play cricket in the colony parks. Our grandparents used to come with us for walk while we played and it was my one of the best time of childhood.
Lastly, public park also organize occasional festival for local business. One benefit is business have organized market in the form of local residents, and secondly residents have great time enjoying the festival. A very small share from the benefit earned by business can be given back to resident association and that money can further be used to build a public library or pool.
So, in my opinion the donation should be invested toward making a public park.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
...ime. Apart from this, generally it also consist playground area for basketball, badmint...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80471380471 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43462050945 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0363457584 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1875 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240193293478 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934908322752 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883439843373 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168558648062 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855055946436 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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