Parents are the best teacher. Do you agree or disagree?
Gaining knowledge is significant and inseparable part of our lives, hence it is important to have a good teacher to teach us valuable lessons. In this regard, whether parents are the best teacher or not depends on some factors, such as personality, characteristics, and upbringings. However, as far as I concerned, I think that there is no doubt parents are the best teacher for some reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, parents provide their children with a huge valuable lessons. As a matter of fact, the majority of parents had studied in school for years. Therefore, they can easily help their children with homework at school such as Math exercise, Physics exercise, Literature exercise. More profoundly, parents also teach their children valuable lessons about life which makes the children more mature and wise. A very good example is my parents who teached me how to be confident in front of crowd. As I grow up, I think this lessons is essential for everyone to create their own life. Besides, being independent is also a helpful lesson which parents teached me when I was young. Thus, I can live on my own by earning money and taking care for myself at present. To summarize, parents are the best teachers for children.
In addition, parents’ advices is one of the most helpful suggestions for children to refer. Indeed, parents are the one who see their child grow up every day, from walking to going to college and getting marriage. Thus, they know thoroughly their children’s characteristics, favourite hobbies, and what to do when facing a puzzle. In other words, parents can give us the best advice when facing difficult problem. For example, when I was in 12th grade, I did not know what university or majors should I take because I had no idea what I like. Fortunately, my parents suggested me going outside and doing whatever I want to make a right decision in the future. After doing many jobs, I decided to follow my passion as a scientist. And now, I appreciate my parent’s advice so much because my present career is comfortable and interesting. In short, parents’ advices is the best one that children should take.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that parents are the best teacher for their children. This is not only because their valuable lessons but also their helpful advice. Thus, children should obey their parents to gain knowledge and become a mortal person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lesson'?
Suggestion: lesson
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...n front of crowd. As I grow up, I think this lessons is essential for everyone to cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in short, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92995169082 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80119618015 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51690821256 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.213036144 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0416666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222159227307 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814235560501 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765483812467 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15642145999 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372123436376 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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