Some people prefer to take a position in a company and work for the company. Other people think it is better to go into business for themselves. Which do you think it is better? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s society, the question should labor work for a company or go into business for themselves has become a controversial topic among people in many circles and cramps. Different people have various types of responses to this topic based on their society, culture, or even family backgrounds. However, as far as I concerned, I believe that startup business is better than working for a company for some reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, going into own business gives the employer more experience. As a matter of fact, people can get knowledge about operating a company by themselves by establishing a corporation. In other words, the owners must find either the investor or the project by themselves. More importantly, getting more beneficial relationships is easier by establishing a business. In fact, people can create new associations with others which benefit in the owner’s future work through starting a company by themselves, such as through a project, a discussion, a meeting,… A good example is my father’s business. When he was a journalist in a local company, he had many colleagues who were specialized in finding and writing news. After retiring, he decided to open a local restaurant near my house, but the staff applied for the restaurant was limited. Therefore, his old coworker helped him by writing small news about lacking positions in a restaurant. Thanks to them, now my father’s restaurant is running on well.
In addition, going into a new company helps the owner more dependent. As a matter of fact, he has no way but to find the money invested by himself. Taking all potential relationships, such as friends, relatives, parents, is a good way to have money to run on a company. Moreover, the owner must be dependent on all operations of the company from the details to the larger one. In other words, getting a good performance requires the owner’s carefulness and hard-working. For example , my friend, Alex, had a dream to open a company which produce toys for children. When he was turning 20, he took a loan for business from his friends and parents. Although they all thought that Alex’s job would meet failure soon, his work turns out to be successful by his passion and keening. His work is admired by others at the same age. In short, being more dependent is improves by establishing a business.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that going into a business is better than working for a company. This is not only because its helpful experience but also its being more dependent. Thus, if condition is supported, people should know how to run on a company by themselves
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , …
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in short, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97550111359 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99777695412 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518930957684 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4267238346 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.36 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.96 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298516754382 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076485855095 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822905880536 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19978544122 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620442153687 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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