People attend college or Universities for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Our society has become a competitive world where every person will try to soar to maximum heights. One of the primary requirements to reach there is to graduate with a degree from a prestigious college which would increase our value. So, I think this is one of the reasons people go to colleges or universities. Education is a minimum requirement for any post in present-day society.
One wants to live a comfortable life for which he needs to get a degree. The employer wants to take an employee based on the employee's portfolio or resume. If the employee is from a prestigious university then his chances of getting a decent salary will become higher and statistics from a Russian journalist show that 65% of the cases where an employer takes a new employee is only if he has a degree. So, going to college or university is necessary.
Going to college, Interacting with different students or teachers helps us to find our passion. During activities in universities, we were made to take on new tasks which help us create new things or inspire us to learn new things. Take Jeff Bezos, for example, he used to be an average student in his class but he found his passion to be an entrepreneur and started a business named "Amazon" that soon became the largest delivery service on Earth. So, universities and its curriculum pave the foundation for us to determine our passion by ourselves.
This necessarily does not mean we need to go to college to succeed in life. Some people did not go to college and they are not that smart compared to other people and yet became billionaires. Their people are very few that could be counted in our hands, instead of learning new concepts they devoted their time to studying society and people. For Example, Karl Ma who is a millionaire and became by making people who are more intelligent than him work together. So, education is not always necessary to succeed in life.
From the above reasons, we can say that education helps to create new opportunities for ourselves which helps people to improve their standard of living than now. So, People go to universities to gain better opportunities in the future, meet new people, and learn new things about themselves.
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- Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students 50
- golden rice 70
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- Altruism 81
- Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
... wants to take an employee based on the employees portfolio or resume. If the employee is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.796875 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85454206017 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528645833333 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5732005391 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9473684211 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202382956196 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716689228748 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075018244042 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114007897394 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408127110115 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.