People attend college or university for different reasons? Why do you think people attend college
College or university is one of the important factors in shaping an individual and plays a pivotal role
in making an indivvidual be a better version of himself. Every person have different perspective in attending college or
university. Some people attend college to fulfill career aspiration or some may just attend college for increasing their knowledge and skills.
In my opinion, most of the individuals attend college or university in order to fulfill career aspirations. After graduating from a high school with basic education students have to decide their field of interest and then pursue their education in core domain. College or university acts as a bridge to for a student to learn new things and gain new experiences in achieving desired goals. For example, if a student in interested in field of software then attending college or university would give him/her right skill sets in order to start his career as a professional in the software industry. College or university would give him/her all the basic knowledge and experiences in the intended field of interest.
There are some people who attend college or university of enhancing their skills and to upgrade their current knowledge. For example there are many people who go back to college after working for some years in order to gain some expertise knowledge in the field. Many individuals attend college to gain masters degree and upgrade their skill set and knowledge to a higher level. Along with this, at college or university there are many things which makes a person grow individually. For exmple, there are many interactive and cultural programs in college in which soft skills which in today's important skill are tested and are improved.
To conclude, I would say that people attend university or college for many different reasons but the college or university helps and individual to grow individually as well as professionally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g an individual and plays a pivotal role in making an indivvidual be a better ver...
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Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...better version of himself. Every person have different perspective in attending coll...
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Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...people attend university or college for many different reasons but the college or university h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17948717949 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81215983406 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455128205128 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7397754732 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427797384245 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178023185874 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113006883739 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260108965736 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108339822817 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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