People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?
Education is important for everybody in modern society. Abundant of people attend university or college for different reasons. Nowadays, most of the individuals obtain higher education for when of getting a good job offer. At the same time, others enroll for college due to increasing their knowledge of certain subjects. As far as I am concerned, most of people who have gotten to academics institutions have done it for career preparation. I believe so for several reasons which I am going to explore in the following passages.
The main reason for obtaining higher education is a possibility of getting a dream job position. Professionals in some areas are strongly demanded by the employers and well-paid. Although, it makes one more competitive in the job market and helps find the right place in society. That is why, departments which provide education of prestigious professions, for example, lawyers, doctors, business programs, etc, are strongly competitive in their admissions. This tendency of the high-paid profession leads individuals enroll in university or college.
Furthermore, there are still present a huge part of students who have involved in studying in case of getting fruitful knowledge. The theoretical ken and obtaining information from professors who have more experience than students much better strategy than learn something on own mistakes. It is useful to learn from others and then approach this in the practice.
Last but not least, the experience of studying in a university provides the inclusive community of humans who desire to border the horizons and who are open to the world. A clique of certain individuals could have and impact on the person's view, thus the learned community would encourage one. To illustrate, talented musicians will share the idea and discuss the new trends, students who learn subjects related to art will show each other their works and get the estimation of it. Consequently, meeting people with the same interests as one’s is one of the reasons for attending a university.
All in all, in a myriad of reasons for admission to university I can point out the most popular: career preparation, the desire of new ken, the community of like-minded people. Nevertheless, the desition of obtaining high education is honorable for human beings regardless of their cases.
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- Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? 67
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? 76
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27807486631 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98024729603 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1576990921 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282315770418 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859762740897 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114560874666 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147296745505 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121963378524 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.