People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People attend college or university for many different reasons. In my opinion the common reason is career preparation. There are also many other reasons such as gaining new experiences and increasing knowledge that inspire people to study at college or university.
Firstly, people study at college or university to prepare for career in the future. Nowadays, the job market is highly competitive and even simple jobs and low positions have a lot of candidates to apply for them. On the other hand, in our advanced world most of the jobs need special skills. College or university provides different programs to teach people required skills to be able to get these jobs in the future.
Secondly, people go to college or university to get new experiences. Living away from the family is a good chance for students to become more independent. They have to make decision on their own and learn how to take care of themselves. Furthermore, in college or university students come from different places have to live and cooperate with each other. Usually people are not comfortable to live with a stranger. So that, living together helps students to learn how to communicate with each other.
Last but not least reason for attending college or university is increasing knowledge. There are many professors and experts with a lot of teaching experience that people can learn basic knowledge from them. They can also help students to solve their study problems and prepare for career. In addition to learning knowledge and skills in their fields, students have the last chance to take courses that are interested in.
To sum up, most of people go to college or university to prepare for career and get a good job in the future. However, there are also other reasons like obtaining new experiences and acquiring more knowledge that motivate people to attend college or university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...People attend college or university for many different reasons. In my opinion the common reaso...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...mmunicate with each other. Last but not least reason for attending college or univers...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... that are interested in. To sum up, most of people go to college or university to prepare ...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
... get a good job in the future. However, there are also other reasons like obtaining new experiences ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252941176471 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.167647058824 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105882352941 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441176470588 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0294117647059 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111764705882 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0323529411765 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68659344755 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0647058823529 0.0309702414327 209% => Too many infinitives.
Particles: 0.00294117647059 0.00188951952338 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.05 0.0887237588012 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00588235294118 0.0209618222197 28% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00882352941176 0.0139019557991 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1883.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 408.028673835 76% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03525641026 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378205128205 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278846153846 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192307692308 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13141025641 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68659344755 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.524397521467 87% => OK
Word variations: 45.0866888731 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4210526316 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2598445682 48.84282405 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1052631579 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.644075263715 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 44.3056680162 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.64634146341 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425521619145 0.300154397459 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114528249336 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0887609163664 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.541166443059 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124443973007 0.151897553556 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187799321523 0.114077575197 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151219787729 0.0781384742642 194% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368552784696 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0303577850022 0.067059652881 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331534255111 0.210909579961 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124149305548 0.0618886996521 201% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 73 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 22 Out of 30