People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries
Travel always considered an exciting activity among people. From the past till now people travel to discover new things and the myth about the world. One of the popular activities in which humans could enjoy and relax is traveling. Any short or long displacement from a settled place to other places for a temporary periods called traveling. People could go and visit other cities of their country or going further and visit other countries. In my opinion, the benefits of traveling to foreign countries is more than travelling in someone's own country. Following reasons and examples will elaborate on my opinion.
First of all, By traveling to a foreign country, you can get familiar with different cultures and histories. It is provided for you to meet new people and make new friends with different types of experience and knowledge. Definitely, on a short journey to a foreign country, you will get valuable and remarkable knowledge of that country tradition, you could learn their local food, ritual and even a few short slang or language they spoke. For instance, If you travel to China, you could get familiar with their specific and amayzing ceremonyes. And also you can visit other interesting places which are unique and you could not find the sample of them in your country like the great Chinese wall.
Second, Some region has just one type of climate and a single form of topology and forest. People in that region always faces cold, dry or even humid, I mean just one type of climate. Certainly if they travel to a foreign country they could benefit and experince new weheter conditions and also enjoy of visiting desert, forest waterwall and whatever natural visiting places which are not available in their own country. For example consider Luxembourg country, this country is not vast enough to contain all of climate type. People of this country could visit desert by traveling to Sina Sahra in Africa and enjoy of watching the stars in the incredible silence which only existed in deserts.
It is important to note that, the price of abroad traveling is much higher than the internal traveling and internal price of flight trains or other means of transportation are much less than external ones and in generall, travelling in your in own country is more economic than visiting a foreign country. Despite all of this, it is worth to save money and experience visiting other places and discover new things.
To summarize the points and reasons, I believe that foreign traveling is more beneficial because you can get familiar with different culture and people and also, you can visit new intersting places which may not existed in your country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'period'?
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, i mean, in general, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98218262806 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50446003717 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476614699332 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8216591889 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.85 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.45 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377138883639 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113618742558 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122039279849 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222423584446 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100406502824 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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