People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; other work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
In this 21st century people have to struggle in every phase of the life. There is no other option of struggle. For example, a student has to struggle in his study to get a good score in exams and an employee have to struggle in his office or workplace to get a money. It is a life in which stress and difficulties are parts of the life. We have to accept it in a positive manner and keep on learning from that.
When people are facing the stress and difficulties, they have different ways of escaping that. It is right that some read; some exercise; other work in their gardens for reducing stress. If I have to mention the best ways of reducing stress then I would like to go with playing Cricket and table tennis, watching movies and to go out with my friends.
As I am a student, I am also facing a lot more stress and difficulties in my career from study, workload etc. Hence, for reducing stress first of all I would like to play cricket with my friends. There are two reasons behind it, first I can meet my friends and second, I can play cricket with them. By playing cricket, I feel very fresh and energetic as well as happy. It is not only playing cricket but also there is a lot more things which can make me feel better from my that situation. I would also like to play table tennis with my friends, but it is my second preference because it is not possible that my every friend can play table tennis.
Watching movies is also a good option for me to relieve stress. Because when I am watching a movie I completely relate myself with a movie. Hence, I can reduce my stress for that time and feel fresh. And last but not least, who would not like to go with friends when they have friends like brothers. So that it is also a best option for me to get fresh or relieve from the stress of difficulties.
In sum up, Stress and difficulties are parts of the life. So that we cannot remove it but we can reduce it from many other things that can make us fresh as well as help us to relieve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...uggle in his office or workplace to get a money. It is a life in which stress and diffi...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...parts of the life. We have to accept it in a positive manner and keep on learning from that. ...
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...nner and keep on learning from that. When people are facing the stress and di...
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...ovies and to go out with my friends. As I am a student, I am also facing a lo...
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...every friend can play table tennis. Watching movies is also a good option fo...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a good option for me to relieve stress. Because when I am watching a movie I completely...
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Suggestion: the
...iends like brothers. So that it is also a best option for me to get fresh or reli...
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...elieve from the stress of difficulties. In sum up, Stress and diffic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, i feel, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20725388601 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27363157104 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40932642487 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9502103093 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212821611402 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821576985679 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094835099826 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148859549054 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127651678738 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.