Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this 21st century, people are living in very fast as well as busy world. From morning to night people have to do hard work and struggle in life. Hence, they have affected to much stress in their life. So that some of those people who want to relieve their stress as well as those people who have inner attraction towards dangerous sports or other dangerous activities are attracted to that activities.
There are some dangerous activities like bungy jumping, bull fighting, horse riding etc. Which attracts the people to do it. But we think that why they want to do activities like that? Reasons behind it are, some people who faded with their daily routine work want to do that type of activities to get rid of that situation. They want something new in their life and these dangerous activities may help them.
There are also some people who want to do this type of activities because of their passion to do it in anyhow. They want to take that type of challenges in their life because they have some inner feeling to do that. Activities like bungy jumping, bull fighting are not easy to do. It is not only dangerous activities but also can take one’s life. Hence, people have to prepare mind strongly to do this type of activities. And by completing this activity he can get relief.
There are also some dangerous activities that students do their classroom like to eat during classroom, make fun of teacher in classroom and to play games during classroom. We can also consider these activities as dangerous activities with respect to students, because they are doing these activities in front of teachers. That may become harmful to them if they are caught to do that thing. But students want to do those activities because they gain happiness by doing those things.
In sum up, due to several reasons some people are attracted to dangerous activities to find the place of happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76435045317 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44659275743 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429003021148 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7940187108 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.85 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333713219691 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120421388921 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751568475398 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23111088314 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475319919693 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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