People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment— doing things they like to do—rather than doing things they should do.
All people, from the very childhood on, are supposed to have some responsibilities and rules to follow. Therefore, there is a widely held belief that, people should sometimes do things unwillingly, because the life is not only about enjoyments. However, when it comes to me, I am strongly of the opinion, that people now are kind of exhausted from those binding and requiring activities and therefore, nowadays they spend much more time on the things they prefer and enjoy, mainly for the reasons mentioned in the following body paragraphs.
To begin with, in current modern era people frequently face some contemporary technological destructors on their ways. The proliferation of innovative technologies and gadgets has had a great influence on the brain and mental processes of people. In other words, they have created strong addiction among society and affected people’s mental abilities, such as concentration, good judgement. My friend’s experience is a compelling example of this. He is a student and he does not do well in school at all. This is mainly because of his addiction to the gadgets and smartphones. He knows his responsibilities quite well and realizes that it is high time he started to perform better in school. However, he fails to give up playing video games and watching movies on his smartphone, as these activities make him experience a great deal of enjoyment and pleasure.
Secondly, life has become a better place to live, with full of entertaining centers, places of interest and malls. In the presence of all these opportunities, doing undesirable things has become virtually impossible. For example, not once, I put of my classes and assignments, simply because I was suggested going to the cinema with my friends. Incidentally, I am supposed to mention that I am not living in a big city, hence the access to the lives’ enjoyments is much more available and the places of interests are boundless in the big cities. That is why, modern people usually fall by the wayside and fails to prioritize their deeds.
In the light of the reasons. Mentioned above, it becomes obvious why people today are more prone to do things they enjoy, rather than spending time on necessary and not always pleasant activities.
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| 2019-11-23 | ChristineSmb | 76 | view |
| 2018-08-26 | paulosoaresit | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, incidentally, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of, such as, by the way, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12398921833 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0207348867 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.517504428 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.611111111 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289377968715 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733259552825 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109881102248 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208087265464 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126992453038 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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