People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
The primary objective of working is to earn money in order to have basic necessities to be able to live.But beyond this, people may have other inducements to work, some of which I will discuss below.
Apart from earning their bread and butter, people may wish to have a job so that they feel that they contribute to society. This may mean that the person wishes to be self-sufficient and not rely on, for example, unemployment compensation to be able to survive or in the case of young adults, their parents.
Being financially stable, they would not have to be dependent on anyone else. Any decisions they make, no matter of what nature, generally only affect them, because no other individual’s hard-earned money is at stake. This can be illustrated by the increasing rate of young people who opt to start earning, even if the job pays less, as soon as they can.This way, they can at least buy their everyday necessities or help fund their studies etc. This would ultimately lessen the burden on their parents or guardians.
Another reason for choosing to work would be to gain experience. There might be children who would wish to work during vacations, such as gaining an internship or volunteering somewhere in order to gain experience, so that once they go out in search for a full-time job they would have enough experience and skills as well as work ethics to be able to work in an actual work environment.
Besides this, the third reason for wanting a job would be to fend off boredom. For example, stay-at-home-moms may wish to work or start working again, especially once their children grow older. This helps them change up their otherwise repetitive and dull routine. Even if they do not need extra money, going out to work and meeting other people can be refreshing and the job itself can give one satisfaction, especially if it is challenging yet achievable.
To sum up, earning money is not the only motive for choosing to work. Besides being financially independent, people may wish to work to avoid being bored, to gain experience or to be able to contribute to society. However, it should be noted that these are not the only reasons for wanting to work as the reason for working can be different from person to person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ve basic necessities to be able to live.But beyond this, people may have other indu...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... the job pays less, as soon as they can.This way, they can at least buy their everyd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, third, well, apart from, at least, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7800511509 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72388962733 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501278772379 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8279134731 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8125 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247019079696 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917039725402 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661978580727 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149490552214 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571005438562 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.