A person whose monument you want to build in your country with reasons.
Scores of people those took birth in my nation are not truly famous. Amongst those famous cadres, I would like to appoint and suggest a name; and is pious from heart and tremendously delivering helps for society and the best known person is Dr Govinda KC. Being a medical line personality, not everyone in this selfish world spread helping hand but he is such a public figure who never hesitated to advent up to village to help needy and destitute people.
I hardly can imagine next name except him. For the first reason, he is a person with benevolent and charitable heart who has arrived up to inaccessible region of the country because of altruism in himself. For instance, when it was during embargo in the country after arrival of constitution, he went hunger strike for couple of days. And who doesn’t accept his sacrifice for the country as an altruistic act? One cannot deny his hardworking in the country.
Second reason is, till date I have not heard any news regarding his prejudiced attitude towards any political groups. Though the country is running through severely politically devastated condition, he is a single icon to support any political groups for welfare of the country so far. In addition, none of any social media like radio; television has broadcasted news regarding his political background. If he has any biased feelings towards political group then, it would have revealed earlier in news and this demeanor is likely to be imitable from my country political leaders.
But, one cannot assume him as the best icon of the country because they might not have discerned his contributions towards country. Separately, depending upon different cases people have their own intriguing selection upon their desired personality. It is inevitable that one has right to choose of their own and vote for them and it is the case of uninterruptable.
So last of all, spending couples of his life period for social activities conducting several tasks in remote areas despite caustic political situation he has marked the safe zone inside many public soul and mind. Appreciating magnanimous soul, everybody should stand to revere the most popular figure; he is an appropriate person whose monument should be built in my town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04021447721 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72757604781 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605898123324 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5731956818 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.588235294 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963977770787 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298346247713 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396248920684 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500248742866 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297975909459 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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