Someone you know plans to move to your community. What do you think that person would find pleasant or unpleasant about your community?
Seoul, my home, has its advantage and disadvantages as a place to live and work, but life here is generally agreeable. Drawbacks to life in Seoul are few and their effects can be minimized by careful planning. At the same time, Seoul’s strengths are so numerous that they outweigh the disadvantages by far.
Perhaps the greatest single drawback to life in Seoul is overwhelming. Seoul is one of the world’s 12 largest cities and has a very high population density. As a result, one must cope with crowds and traffic jams on a daily basis. Crowding and heavy traffic are simply realities of life in Seoul, however, and anyone who lives here must learn to tolerate them.
On the positive side, Seoul is much safer than major American cities such as New York, Baltimore, and Washington D.C. In the neighborhood where I live, one can walk outdoors at a late hour with no fear of assault or robbery. I have actually had misplaced or overpaid money returned to me by strangers. Violent crime is extremely rare. So is vandalism. It is difficult to imagine such an atmosphere of safety and honesty in a US city.
Almost anything one might need or wish is available in Seoul, in many cases at a modest price. If you cannot find something in Seoul, then you probably do not need it. People are usually polite. Public transportation is inexpensive and reliable. The city’s cultural opportunities are excellent. In short, if work requires you to live in a very large city. Then Seoul is probably the best place to be. That is why I recommend It to anyone who is considering moving here.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-09-13 | Subash Devkota | 3 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, then, in short, such as, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74460431655 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8191274229 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.805564715 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.95 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0528645185947 0.236089414692 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016830512253 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492205903872 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.031001212627 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536956753662 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.