playing computer is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Playing games specifically computer games is very prevalent among children nowadays and it is counted as a factor of backwardness in children. In addition to waste of time, it is not good for them physically and mentally. Hence, I completely agree with the statement that parents should not allow their children to play computer games. This essay explains why.
First of all, computer games make children sluggish and lethargic. As it is clear, playing games is very interesting and almost everybody don't wanna lose, so people tend to pay a close attention to them . This attention will make them to stay on computers for long hours and forget their daily tasks. As a result, they won't study and do their school assignments which impacts their academic performance. Thus, computer games are not only waste of time, a bad behavior as well.
Secondly, computer games are disadvantageous for their health. When children play games, they'll get accustomed to it and cornea, specially in children. This case overlaps my brother's. He was complaining from his eye and when we took him to doctor, he said it is because of bright light. So we concluded that it was because of playing very much game. Hence, playing games can be a threat to children's health.
Moreover, playing games make children unsocial and isolated. Since games can be an addition to children, they will love to stay at home and pass new missions of the game. However, this condition adversely affects to children's social behavior. Once they are isolated, they won't be back as they were, all in all, people will hate them. In addition, impropriety will also occur in them which is a bad consequence for their future. They won't be like normal people; can't interact, love, cooperate, sympathize, and behave socially. Therefore, they shouldn't be allowed to play computer games.
In short, games are like diseases whether they are video games or computer games. They attract children and once they are addicted, they will lose everything. Sluggishness, health problems, and impropriety are the main adverse effects of games in addition to waste of time. Therefore, not allowing children to play them is a must.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03324099723 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66798920863 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.012782374 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8846153846 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8846153846 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410527689948 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127282660598 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114869058167 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268464720123 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846757697628 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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