political and social views,topics don't discuss with friends
The term social or political views means someone having anything in his mind regarding these two aspects of life.Any person can have their different ideas and views in their mind about politics or social affairs nowadays happening in the world,so what i belive that these views should not be discussed with our friends .
I would like to explain my point of view by these statements.
Firstly,if we are going to discuss the political view with our friends and he doesnt like my views ,for example a leader can be the favourite or the worst personality for any one,once i was talking to my friend that dont caste your vote for this leader of this political party,he asked me why? when i gave the reason he got annoyed that this is your point of view not mine,and he stopped talking to me for a long period of time, so after this talk i realized that we should not give or share our views about politcs to our friends ,they can give us a hard time even by quitting the relationship.
Secondly,as much as the social views are concerned, i would rather say that,we never know which person is a silent admirer of any film star,singer ,model or any one working in a social media,once i remember that a wife got divorce from his husband due to a fight over a very different topic and that topic was ,the husband disliked one actor of hollywood ,and the wife was a fan of that actor,when the husband said something bad about that actor she became so sensitive about the personality that they had a very bad fight over this issue and finally ended up on divorce.Same goes to friends any friend can be senstitive about these type of views and we can loose any of our good friend or even maybe the person starts disliking you because you said some thing which he may not like.
In conclusion i will definately say that helathy discussions about politics and social views are very encourging but they are really very sensitive too ,we should keep our point of view to ourselves,we should not open our views as we are not the best judges,we are the best judge for ourself only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54666666667 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39784349083 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501333333333 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.1344086022 308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.647691477 48.9658058833 442% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.166666667 100.406767564 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.5 20.6045352989 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 5.45110844103 324% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149592032981 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843054684475 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659512714827 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874802879843 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603484951097 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 11.7677419355 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.47 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.0537634409 267% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.