Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have differing views with regard to how they can spend their time when either they are under pressure or experience high stress. While some argue that the best approach in these situations is to spend their time alone, I believe that there are better approach to be relax and enjoy their time to reduce stress. So, I disagree with this assertion.
The first reason is that spending time alone during high stressed-situation in most cases result in some negetive consequences. In today's hectic life, everyone needs a emotional support form others and most of time daily conversation could be effective, while some people who spend most of their free time alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation, and worry. Undoubtedly, all these features, would have direct inflluence on other aspect of life such as team work, general quality of life and even on other members of family. In other words, person's interaction between other individual would be affected if he or she could not chose an appropriate approach to relax or mitigate their stress.
Another subtle point is that there are more effective ways by cooperation with others, lead to disapperance of people's pressure and can be more exciting. Music is somthing that accompaies all of us throughout our lives. As children, parents and teachers by using music as means of learing language, led us feel delight and create a connection between other participants, regardless of age and background. This connection, finally, gave rise to forget a pressure and stress that children might experience during given a task or homework. Later in life, perhaps our musical preference develop, but by taking part in large events like traditional music concert, we can reduce our stress and be more pleased.
Similarly, there are some hobby like taking photo and swimming have certainly positive effect to reduce stress and relax. These hobbies can be seen as activities that are both easy to do or enjoy and simple to learn. when someone feels something like bored and nervous, by either simple equipments and minimum budget for swimming or without knowning too much about technicalities of operating camera, could participates through this activitis ,with his or her intimate friend. In other words, one by doing such exercises could run away form any life-burden and strain.
In conclusion, while there are some negative consequences of spending time alone to reduce daily stress and relax, it is clear to me taking part in group activies could make a huge difference.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... In todays hectic life, everyone needs a emotional support form others and most ...
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Line 3, column 642, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...ould be affected if he or she could not chose an appropriate approach to relax or mit...
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Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hobbies'?
Suggestion: hobbies
...pleased. Similarly, there are some hobby like taking photo and swimming have cer...
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Line 8, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...asy to do or enjoy and simple to learn. when someone feels something like bored and ...
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Line 8, column 408, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'participate'
Suggestion: participate
...chnicalities of operating camera, could participates through this activitis ,with his or her...
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Line 8, column 443, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ould participates through this activitis ,with his or her intimate friend. In othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, similarly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71626600425 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570048309179 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5195865857 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.470588235 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202426033568 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658996728378 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523341950534 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119823999805 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504088700486 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.