Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, education plays an important role in the life of children and students and this is nessecary the teachers to try to learn everythings they need. definetly they choose different methods for teaching. Some teachers prefer to assign a project to group of students while other teachers ask them to work on projects seperatly. Personally I am on the side of whom they strongly belive that students should work together.
To begin with, working together on the one projects improves the students teamworking's skill. When they have to spend their time together and discuss about different solution they can be familiar with various opinions, moreover this ability helps them to tolerate handle confusing situation in their future job. For example, when I was a highschool student my history teachers asked me and my friend to do a project. It was a hardest project for me because we disagree together in many cases in our project. Finally after a lot of discusion we did it. in that assignment we learnt many usuful points about working with others. This experiment helped me in one serious project that I had been assigned in a professional group at may job.
Secondly, If teachers assign projects on students to work together they can learn many valuable points from eachother. Even thogh, they may be able to do it in person, but their knowledge can be improved about that subject. because they listen to their classmates' opinions. Also, they these knowledge can be very valuable for each person life. For instance, in my above experince, after that project, I had many information about the period of date that we had searched about that because my friend had many information about that so I learned from him. after years I won in a TV show which was about history. I had not
been successful in that program, if I wouldn't have had those information.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that this is a perfect method that teachers force students to work on projects as a team. This is because they learn teamworking and also, they can share their knowledge those are helpful for their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ogether on the one projects improves the students teamworkings skill. When they h...
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...e and my friend to do a project. It was a hardest project for me because we disag...
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...dge can be improved about that subject. because they listen to their classmates opinion...
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...dge can be improved about that subject. because they listen to their classmates opinion...
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...ve experince, after that project, I had many information about the period of date that we had se...
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...arched about that because my friend had many information about that so I learned fro...
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...arched about that because my friend had many information about that so I learned from him. after...
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...ry. I had not been successful in that program, if I wouldnt have had those inf...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...in that program, if I wouldnt have had those information. To conclude, I am of the opinion that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in many cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62536887473 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9317700508 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309418302358 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106876356609 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922769095652 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172226637224 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105009034502 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.