Questions: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Every day, every time a part of people in the society are experiencing hungry and poverty. However, in the warm society, some of people are willing to spend their money and energy to look after these people. Thus, for the question, I disagree with the statement due to the fact that each person has different situations.
To begin with, people who have decent and stable income are likely to help people who in need. Due to the fact that these people are in the possession of addition energy to help people in need and they are likely to satisfy the requirement of these such as foods or clothes. Taking recent events as example, most people sent their videos concerning helping people in poverty on the internet to call for people ought to take care of people in need surrounding you. Through the kind of video people are able to extract information from them that these people are richer than most people due to the fact that they spend money and time to renew the old house and buy a lot of daily necessities for them. However, normal people are not very likely to spend money and energy on these things that cannot bring more benefits to them.
Second, in contrast, people who are swamping in work for livelihoods will not be able to spend previous and limited time and energy on people who are not relative to them. Considering their salaries, they even don’t have self-confidence to help people in need. That leads to a consequence that the most of them are careless for people they don’t know. And such examples are often to happen in the society like beggars. All we meet the scenario that there is a beggar on the street and beg for money or food, but people all ignore them because most people believe that if they have time to take care of them, they are better to the time to make more money or enjoy themselves yet.
In the end, due to the difference of mind between rich and ordinary people, the reaction to such situation will not same at all. Only rich people are, they are able to pay attention to things other than money. And I believe that it is not relative to past or now, the society is always like this whenever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
... poverty. However, in the warm society, some of people are willing to spend their money and en...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... each person has different situations. To begin with, people who have decent an...
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Suggestion:
...s foods or clothes. Taking recent events as example, most people sent their video...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at cannot bring more benefits to them. Second, in contrast, people who are swam...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke more money or enjoy themselves yet. In the end, due to the difference of min...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, so, thus, in contrast, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49487179487 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24370109614 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45641025641 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7268730058 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5625 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444662810018 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159363461758 0.076458572812 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850911618192 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258243437847 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118776455629 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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