Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Teaching plays pivotal role
Teaching plays a pivotal role

as it will teachers to improve,
as it will ask teachers to improve,

Sentence: The evaulation method will help judge teachers progress and abilities in a more holistic way by incorporating various parameters in the evaluation sheets.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to teachers and progress

Sentence: One such way of ensuring quality education in schools is having continous evaluation of teachers by their students.
Error: continous Suggestion: continuous

Sentence: Second, evaulation will help in ensuring accountability of teachers.
Error: evaulation Suggestion: evaluation

Sentence: The evaulation of teachers will bring to these faults in teachers in the notice of school authorities, which will help them to take necessary corrective action.
Error: evaulation Suggestion: evaluation

Sentence: Besides, fear of evaulation will compel teachers to take all classes regularly and in an effective manner.
Error: evaulation Suggestion: evaluation

Sentence: Finally, evalution method will provide the schools an effective method for evaluating the performance of teachers.
Error: evalution Suggestion: evolution

Sentence: Currently, schools mostly use acadmic results as the sole criteria to judge the performance of teachers.
Error: acadmic Suggestion: academic

Sentence: The evaulation method will help judge teachers progress and abilities in a more holistic way by incorporating various parameters in the evaluation sheets.
Error: evaulation Suggestion: evaluation

Sentence: For example, a teacher in charge of a class comprising of bright students is bound to get high grades, but this does not ensure that this teacher is fullfilling his or her duties in an effective manner.
Error: fullfilling Suggestion: fulfilling

Sentence: In conclusion, the evaluation of teachers by students should be incorporaed in the schools as it help teachers in improving, make them more responsible and will help school authorities in having an impartial performance evaluation on teachers in schools.
Error: incorporaed Suggestion: incorporated

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 537 350
No. of Characters: 2827 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.814 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.264 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.903 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 235 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 188 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 137 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 80 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.163 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.217 0.07
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