Should teenagers work while they are students?
Some intellectuals believe that people should work since they are students and know about numbers and principles, others are on the other side, believing that teenagers should just study and enjoy the school. Personally speaking, I have a normalized point of view. I think teenagers in early ages should study hard and learn many things that are important for their future job. Of course, it can not be work for everybody. But still is true for people who want to give important and high prestigious jobs in the future. I will explain my opinion in the following paragraphs.
In the first place, I should mention that an educated personality is not a person who only attends school. It means a person who has learned how to deal with life difficulties. This person can handle his/her problems by himself/herself. HE/She has enough knowledge to figure out the situation and can ameliorate bad conditions. I believe an early age is the best time to learn these kinds of important lessons. We should be conscious of the principle rules of life and get the essential lessons from academic areas. For instance, if a student work after school, he/she has not enough time to do his/her homework and also cannot play a game with his/her friend. During the games, children learn many important lessons: such as communicate, be careful, and caring for others. If teenagers don’t learn to teach these basic lessons, they will face serious psychological problems in the future.
Secondly, everything should occur in the right place and at the right time. The youngsters should teach from their environment and become experienced.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i think, of course, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00740740741 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72028401648 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5871592389 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231619774476 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597948374674 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798010583127 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159421204443 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719449682177 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i think, of course, such as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00740740741 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72028401648 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5871592389 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5294117647 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231619774476 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597948374674 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798010583127 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159421204443 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719449682177 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.