Social media take away relationships?
social media take away relationships?
this is the most dramatic question among people that say social media can take away relationships, if you mulled it over you would understand that every now and then it can affect some relationships but, sometimes not, follow these steps.
Firstly, social media is figurative relationships among most of the people that utilize it, social media (figurative virtual) can get people around face to face meeting, not only would their camaraderie situation hurt but also, they wouldn’t know them selves for prospective therefore, social media can change people’s treating, they wouldn’t be that best and brightest one that used to be every thing among them would be altered.
Secondly, social media can do bad things on people’s lives by the virtue of that, they wouldn’t do those things that used to do. for example, helping each others, have ever thought that why native people used to enhance each others that was what that the were richer and had affluent economic? Or, have you ever thought that why we are poor now(even don’t have that mean to pass our days)? Actually if we think about this all of these are related to our treatment and the issue that eliminate all the cores to inhibit this malicious situation is social media.
Thirdly, social media is making people hate their family day in and day out in their daily lives, occasionally, you would be caught off guard that why your parents don’t take care about you all of these come to social media, another hurt of social media. To my knowledge, all the time social media isn’t a bad thing, sometimes it can soothe you when you don’t pay much money to have the access to fans, sometimes it can help you that do every thing that you like in your life by figurative virtual, like: some online jobs, online studies(don’t pay a lot money to face to face classes), online working and etc. To be foolproof about your time and life, this is an outright thing that can so good things.
To recapitulate, try to cut off this dim this way to back of my idea get around this is reluctant situation this isn’t what is said by me this is according a quest, so social media isn’t amazing thing not bad thing(the less to use it the more would have time with your family), it should be used not too much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72098765432 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40129772363 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.467984033 48.9658058833 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.818181818 100.406767564 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8181818182 20.6045352989 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320087315289 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188790090185 0.076458572812 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.27450582442 0.0737576698707 372% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301761618345 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.319904007645 0.0645574589148 496% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 11.7677419355 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.