Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
Every new technology developed in the recent times can be advantageous only it is used in the proper way.I agree that the smart phones with Internet access should be kept away from the young children as they are not mature enough to handle the smart phones and it may lead to some irresponsible behaviours.
To begin with, nowadays ,eventhough the youg children are smart enough, the exposure to wider technology can cause harm to them. I have heard news where a child on playing the game PUBG have lost the chalenge in the game and he made a transaction of nearly hundred thousand bucks from his parent's account to pay for the challenge.So it is clearly not good for the children to have access to smart phones until they attain a certain age to use the phone.
Furthermore, it will take the leisure time of the children, during when they can play some outdoor game or some other physical activity.Suppose if a child,after returning from school stays in smart phone the full evening, his body will not get refreshen up and in turn he will become lethargic in doing any physical activity.Physical activities like football,tennis strongly help the students for both body and brain development. If the student did not get the exposure, his mind and soul will get numb in the young stage when they are supposed to be gaining the development.
And also,owning smart phone can also spoil their educaton.Nowadays there are various online games introduced with advanced technology inorder to attract the young children.So the children may get more fascinated in the video games and spend the time allotted for studying.
To conclude, parents should forbid young children from owning smart phones as it can lead them to lack of brain and body development,lack of education and more than that, they might get involve in some malicious activities.So it is better to keep them away from smart phones with internet access until they attain the maturity level to handle them.
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- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones cell phones with Internet access while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch Which point of view do you think is better and why 76
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- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones cell phones with Internet access while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch Which point of view do you think is better and why 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93093093093 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82440694162 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.1344086022 233% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.649320486 48.9658058833 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 234.571428571 100.406767564 234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.5714285714 20.6045352989 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325681107955 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154328421836 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823215933511 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194972399389 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640865045439 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 11.7677419355 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 10.1575268817 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.0537634409 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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