Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference.
if someone tries to predict which is the best way to deal with life's challenges, maybe the person will fail. But, if I have to choose a better condition to face life's problems, I would say that my family and friend's advices are my first choice. There is no doubt that good and bad experiences during our lives can help us. Otherwise, frustrated situations may push ourselves into a psychological issue.
Sometimes, when we need to leave our family's home early, we will be force to fight against any adversity alone. Honestly, this situation makes anyone stronger and prepared. On the other hand, having his parent's support a youth can absorb their previous experience and take the best way on a important decision. Absolutely we can trust in someone who really love and take care of us for a whole life.
As life shows me, bad and good previous experiences would help people for the next important choice. While we are alone, even with a carefully thinking about our problems, we can pick up the worst way. Though, life can teach us with marvelous or dangerous experiences. however, if a relative or a good friend had the same situation before, they will be very helpfull with us. Sharing their own experience, relatives make our way shorter and easier.
Another very important point of view is the love that our family has with us. Surrounding their sieblings with protection and true love, mom, dad, and always expect a better future for the next generation. And when we put our future on life's choice, we can be at a lotery.
To conclude, I would say that our family and friends are the best people to help and teach us how to fight against any issue. however, our own challenges can be very helpfull.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, honestly, however, if, may, really, so, while, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6976744186 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51399543884 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1921319823 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182937539548 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583962783493 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550865478564 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110492569496 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472626403171 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.