Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Eating is a basic necessity for all human beings and it does not matter from where you eat. It is important because a person can not survive without food but by eating healthy food the life span can be increase while others disagree. In my view, though both are important but I prefer home made food. In the following essay I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, at home the food we cook is extremely healthy and hygienic and especially in this time, as covid is every where so it is good to be save at home. For instance, just few days ago one of my friend she is so foodie and loves junk food, even though only once a week she ates home cooked food as usual when she went to restaurant it was a public holiday there was numerous people and when she came back the stomach ache started, at first she ignores may be it is just random pain after one hour no stop vomiting started and she called me then I took her to the hospital in emergency and bill cost was 5000 dollars just because of some unhygienic food. Thus this example elucidates that home made food can safe you from many problems.
Second, its not bad if you visit restaurants ocassionally as it is a part of enjoyment. For example, my husband is concious about his diet and regularly eats at home but some times like on my birthday we went to the most expensive steak house which was really fascinating and if you eat meals outside once in a month or in a week they will not harm your body. Therefore, this example illustrates the benefits of outside dinners.
Third, some restaurants only care about their business and their only concern is money not your health. To exemplify, as I am food inspector I visited one restaurant suddenly I saw they do not wash the cooking cookers and bowl and reuse it next day which is so harmful for people who eat such food and the restaurant was full as they have tasty food.
To wrap up, in my opinion it is good to have food on home instead of eating outside. The most important reasons are hygiene and health of person
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, so, then, therefore, third, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33928571429 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28858096246 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.770315126 48.9658058833 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.5 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33142353494 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106822344169 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461754616113 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180038973613 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477296892909 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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