Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants, while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days, there are many options to eat such as delivering, eating at restaurants, or at home. Personally, I prefer to eat at home rather than go to restaurants. I feel this way for three main reasons which I will investigate in the following essay.
To begin with, it is healthier to eat at home than eating at restaurants since people know what ingredients are in the meal. It is impossible to know if the restaurants’ ingredients are fresh, and it can ruin a person's health. For instance, my friend got food poisoning after eating a restaurant meal. He vomited and was sick for a long time. He said the taste was not weird at all, and it was a regular taste as usual. Even though the meal is tasty, we do not know if they use fresh and healthy ingredients.
On top of that, eating at restaurants costs a lot compared to eating at home. Most of the restaurants cost a lot since it includes the payment for labor, insurance, and the renting price. However, people can save money by purchasing ingredients at the supermarket without any other payment. For example, in the cafeteria at school, lunch costs about 11 dollars. However, if I pack my own lunch box at home, it will never cost more than 10 dollars. It is possible to pack the lunch from dinner before the day, which can be more efficient and cost cheaper.
Furthermore, although people assert that restaurants have more high-quality foods compared to foods made at home, it is possible to cook foods of the same quality as meals from restaurants. Nowadays, numerous famous chefs provide thousands of recipes that are easy even for beginners. From my experience, my father almost never cooked in his entire life. Nevertheless, he started cooking five years ago. He did not even know how to use kitchens, but when he began reading recipes from famous chefs, the number of meals that he cooks amplified. And now, his food tastes like the food from restaurants.
Therefore, I prefer eating at home for health and costs. Also because it is possible for people to cook the same quality as the meals from restaurants.
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- Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 83
- Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70765027322 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69907327912 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6138085692 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9130434783 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9130434783 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04347826087 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302432035915 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921341293007 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865651571224 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182924416835 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484412560124 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.