Some people prefer to live in a small town, others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Considering my life style favors, I would prefer to live in a big city whose job market and transportation system is more promising and effective than in a small town.
To explore further, big city is always fulfilled with challenging job vacancies with big city’s desire for progress and improvements. Such work interest demands competitive and knowledge workers to support. I have always been a workaholic and a learner who happen to be capable of taking up this kind of work and would be excited to confront to all the challenging assignments. Design project engineer for instance, perfectly fits into city style job description—demanding, challenging, and yet promising and fun, and would never exist in a small town job wanted description. I am a design project engineer myself and I can never leave behind such city working style.
Secondly, city provides a solid transportation system. While city demands notable and fast development, it needs resources to be well inter-connected that’s when solid transportation system comes into play. The effective city transportation system provides goods transportation and delivers labor transmission in no time comparing to small town’s system. Thanks to the effective system, the products that our design engineers fabricate can then be shipped to reliability lab quickly and be sent back to our factory for debug if there is any failure. The system secured our time of cost.
In summary, a city offers a much more challenging and fast-paced style of work and life that perfectly fits my lifestyle appetite. Thus, I would choose to live in a city over a small town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22433460076 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28327381489 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7222750843 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11167028835 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482500690502 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783793536637 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102876649163 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827535462653 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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