Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Nowadays, more people are giving the internet mixed reviews. The percentage of people who think internet is not good for society is shrinking. In my point of view, internet is very good for today’s life, and provide them various data about different subjects. In this text, I am going to mention three reasons to prove this fact.
To begin with, when we talk about internet world, that means, every data for every search and question is available. As a result, when a person have some question who doesn’t have any one to answer her or him so internet is the biggest source to have the answer. For instance, a chemists wants to know the earliest discovery and no one around her may doesn’t know. But, by a click, she can find out through internet.
Secondly, these days social networks help people to communicate with each other from far away very easily and effective. People who might not see each other very often in reality but they can be in touch with social network through internet. For example, some times there is not enough money to visit your friends who leave in other countries so this opportunity help you to talk to them and see them without paying huge money to by ticket and see them.
Thirdly, people, and especially women start getting college degree through online classes. Online colleges help majority of mam’s to associate to colleges without leaving their kids. as a matter of fact, before they were away of studding when many responsibilities were on their shoulder but these days, they can enter to colleges without any problem.
To sum up, internet is a very good facility for human been. Although, it might have some side effect but it’s advantages are more than disadvantages. People are changed since they use internet as their main source of knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8284789644 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41633822551 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585760517799 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7485325696 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7647058824 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18018274703 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585718414172 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517316899451 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944332332454 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529928819984 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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